Hm...
This isn't actually that bad a submissiom. The graphics are simple, but it actually adds to the overall gameplay that way. The gameplay itself is actually quite fun, too. It's simple, and orginal and it provides a lot of replay ability. Not only that, but once you play you are automatically sucked in to continue playing. It would be nice to see some power ups or upgrades or somthing, though. Overall not a bad submission, you worked hard on it and you created somthing fun. Good job.
Well it's simple.
When you think about it, this is a simple game. And is your generic n00b flash game. I suppose you have to start somewhere, but my advice is to do somthing more challenging, somthing with a bit more depth. I mean sure you could continue this, but you would never get anywhere with it. The graphics in the game are pretty lame and thus, my advice is to go out and just re do them altogether, or create some sort of story or background or somthing. Overall this is just another one of those "meh" submissions that no one really thinks about after awhile.
Well, it's not supposed to be an elaborate game, it's just supposed to be fun and challenging. And I have made everything go well together, so I am happy with it.(Don't worry, for other genres that I will be making games in, My graphics will be MUCH better.
It's a dress up.
When you think about it, that's what this is. A simple dress up. Now don't get me wrong, it's done pretty well, for what it is, and it definatly is a quality submission. The problem is who wants to dress up a stick man? Now if the drawings were a bit better and you actually had a template or somthing to work off of than yes, maybe it would have worked, but as it is, it really dosen't provide a lot of entertainment. Overall, there isn't much to say about this, other than that it is pretty bad.
Hm...
Well I personally don't like golf games because they tend to be things like mini golf or some other variation, but this happend to be somthing totally different. Which is great, but the execution is lacking somthing, somthing that makes it stand out in general from other games. Somthing that will make me return to the game after dying. I liked that you gave us a story to work off of, to at least give us a reason to play the game, but the story is a bit farfetched for my eyes. If you were to make somthing with one guy hating another, not just a whole group it would have made sense. I also don't understand how there can be so many golf people, who all seem to have the "electirc caddy". I mean since when is there 100 or more people on one golf hole?
Anyway, the graphics in this submission are nice, but nothing special. You see when you create two character models and use them over and over, it gets dull real fast, and the graphics in general get a hit. The controls are also a bit odd. I mean if I wanted I could continue to press U or I and I could just keep going on and on. That is if I knew to go on in the first place, I spent the first five minutes just standing there, wondering what to do. There is also a problem with rewards, I mean isn't there upgrades or special bonouses or somthing? What about a highscores table? Somthing that will give us a point in playing it, or a point in coming back. Now that I thin of it why not some sort of dying animation? Like the guy falling down or somthing, instead of just dissipearing.
The good.
1. Fairly orginal- How many games like this are there?
The bad.
1. Few character models- I mean it's not fun hitting the same guy over and over is it?
2. Glitchy controls- A bit odd that you can click the same button over and over and kill them off just like that.
3. No instructions- They are there, but they don't help you very much.
4. High scores- What's the point of coming back to this?
5. No rewards/upgrades- Pretty one sided gameplay than.
Overall I would say that you put some good work into this, but there just isn't enough reason to play this game, and it just dosen't provide the fun it could. Pretty average game. 5/10
"I mean since when is there 100 or more people on one golf hole?", lol very true, its meant to be far fetch. It doesn't seem anyone had gotten to the later levels with more characters. yer i was thinking of adding bonuses and other clubs but heh its my first platform. thanks for the comment, ill defiantly use the advise for future platform games.
It's been done.
To be honest with you, there is nothing funny about turning an overused idea into flash. I mean, I am sure we all love those books you can get that do this type of thing, but in flash there just dosen't seem to be a point to it. Not only that, but the sheer effort you put in was minimal to say the least. I can see it on the fact that you didin't even take the time to fix grammar and spelling, is it really that hard to put somthing in Microsoft Word? Overall this is just bad. It's unorginal, unfunny and imature. Now only if people relized how abusive the reviews below me are...
Still a bit odd.
It would have been much, much easier if you just posted an actual instrucitons box instead of a picture. Anyway, I suppose I can commend you for this actually working, but I am still very confused as to how it works. Anyway, maybe next time give us some examples or somthing to work off of, just to see how it is like. Instead of us having to go find somthing ourselves. Overall, well I personally would never use this, and I personally don't like it, but it is made well and does what it is made out to do. Meh.
Pretty good.
To be honest with you, I am not a fan of crews in general and I don't really like the cc to much, but this game was very well made and really is somthing special for the cc, in my opinon. Although lacking a much needed highscores table, the gameplay was quite fun, if a bit 1 dimenshonal. The graphics were all very well made and the "clocks" were all detailed very nicely. It would be nice though, if you could choose who you can be. Not only that, but some sort of background changes or story would also be nice. Anyway, nice job the submission was well done and it provided some fun for a while. 7/10
Reminds me of...
This submission reminds me of Pokemon. The exact same way you play too. Next time add a bit more interactivity. Like, for example, if I click space at a tree, a message actually appears. As well, maybe next time add an expierence system. Seems kinda redundant otherwise, to battle the monsters. Maybe some custimization too, like color of hair, clothing and stuff like that. The gameplay itself was quite enthralling, and kept you going, I personally didin't like the whole, running back and forth type of gameplay. Overall though, you made a good game and it really is worked hard on. Great job.
Hey Dew, thanks for playing the game.
In this game I had the idea that you had to beat monsters to access upgrades, which was kinda my substitute for a level system. And about the customization, well cause of the story I didn't intend to put that in :) you wouldn't like a Red heared cloud with dreadlocks and some robe in FF7, would you :D ?
But chapter 2 will bring improvements and further the story :D don't worry
How is this fun?
I suppose the positive note for this "game" is the rag doll affect, but I don't really see any other positive other than that. From what I saw there was no health bar, which lead to me just letting them fight it out a few times, with no real clear idea how to win or do anything. The game itself could be pretty good, but there is a point where rag doll, and control over the player need to intertwine and you have not done that here. Maybe next time try adding a background, and some selectable characters, work more on it. Overall I don't know, this isn't exactley orginal and it dosen't exactley blow me away, but I can tell you that it needs some more work into it for sure, good potential.
Thanks, man. I really appreciate it :)
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