Dew's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario vs. Link part1]

Looks like something made out of..

I have to be honest with you, this submission really dosen't look very good, and to be brutally honest, it looks like something out of a beginning 12 year old or lower. I can't say that the animation is absoluteley terrible, because it isn't, but there really isn't any entertainment value with this submission. The graphics are that of sprites, but the man made stuff isn't very good, and the storyline is [pretty terrible to be honest. Overall, all in all this really shoulden't cut it on NG, get some more tutorial work in you.

[Guy vs. Wall]

I suppose for your first...

I suppose for your first type of submission, this isn't bad. I can't say that the submission was terrible, but it just seemed so oddley made. The movements didin't really seem smooth or concise, and if anything, they moved very clunky, like that of a robot. The graphics were also very reminescent of a first submission, although it again, wasn't bad, it just didin't have that "it" factor to it, it wasn't top notch so to speak. This submission really didin't entertain me, and the unorginal end made the flash seem sour. Overall, a good first flash, but other then that it's really not great.

[Totemo Hentai Furry Yiff]

Seems like a...

To be honest with you, this submission seems like more of an excuse for what appears to be a lack in flash skill. It seems like since you are so bad at flash, you deliebretley make a flash that isn't good to pretend like a spam group. Now, that's all great and the like, but that dosen't change the fact that this is a terrible submission. The graphics were poor at best and they had no detail at all, the story was hard to follow, and all in all it was a bad flash. Work on something next time.

[Stick Brawl: Round #1]

I suppose this is your first.

If this submission is your first submission made then I understand about the quality. The submission itself wasn't all that great, it had potential, but still needs a lot more work. Nontheless the graphics were poor, my advice is to make the sticks thicker and bigger, and actually draw a background. Maybe take more time drawing the smaller parts of the submission. Overall, well this submission wasn't all that great and it didin't entertain that much, but it wasn't absoluteley horrible. It does have potential. Oh, and put "Replay" On that button in the end.

mothballs responds:

Honestly; I hate long reviews. Just keep it simple.

[DBZ: The brawl Ep1]

Not much of a fan...

Well I have to be honest with you here, I am not much of a fan for this type of animation, and certinley not DBZ, but this was done quite well. The action started quickly, despite some odd looking moves, and it was somewhat entertaining to watch. The graphics were smooth and well made. The sticks were thick and clear, and looked normal. Although some pause buttons and the like would be nice. Maybe some sort of menu too. Nontheless, a good overall submission, even if it's not my type of thing.

["Winter"]

A bit harsh.

Well, to start off, a great submission. Truly gets the point across. Although the submission itself is a bit harsh don't you think? I mean is all that blood really nececary? Not to mention the grossness of it. Although I have to commend you on the hard work nontheless, the graphics were great and the detail is really top notch. Even if there really wasn't much of a storyline. Overall, good stuff, just the right length and for the most part, entertaining. Truly great stuff.

[Spider-Powers For Xmas]

Nice.

I have to say that you really did a good job with this submission. The graphics in the submission weren't the greteast I have ever seen, but they worked well and everything looked sleek and smooth in the end anyway. Nontheless the storyline was orginal and fun, and the animation itself, was very entertaining. Although picturing you make this submission really makes me laugh, spending all that time just for this. Nonthless, a good submission, it entertained and it looked good, even without subtitles.

[It's a Halo Thing]

Good.

Although I am not a fam of Halo in anyway, I found this submission to be quite entertaining. I have played Halo and I know enough about it to have understood the jokes. Nontheless, the graphics in this submission are stunning. They are detailed and the lip sync is marvoulus. Although considering the black things on the top and bottom, I was expecting subtitles, which I think this submission would have benefitted from. And sadly, I was dissipointed to see them not there. Next time, make sure they are. Overall, good work, everything moved well, it was realistic, and it entertained. Nice.

[SBC's Cookie Clockmas!]

Awesome.

Wow, now this is one of the better submissions I have seen around, not only for the humor, but for the simple work put into it. The subtitles alone made me love it, but the humor really entertained me. The storyline was simple and fun and it truly worked out well for the audiance. The graphics were good, although not great or anything special they did the job they intended to, and it worked out niceley. Overall, well what can I say? You can enjoy this submission with sound or no sound, and I have to say it's my favorite Christmas submission so far this year. Great stuff.

RupeeClock responds:

Thank you, this kind of feedback means a lot to me, it really does.