Dew's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[.:Clay life 2!:.]

A bit quick.

The first thing that jumps out at me, that is an improvement is the background and text. This time the text is clear and readable enough to make an impact on the story. The video is highlighted well with the background and it's a very nice job. But it's still basically the same story, again you need definate characters with names, places and such and an actual story. Why does thatr thing eat the person, where did they find the board? All these things need to be answeard to be considered a good claymation. Below average.

[.:Clay life 1:.]

Well its simple.

This submission is your generic claymation first try submission. Despite this its not bad, although I dont have sound I can see why this wouldent do well with the sound. Maybe add more then one color for the claymation? Some definate characters wouldent be bad ether. As well as an actual story, maybe these two guys are fighting over a car or somthing. Something that would keep the viewers intreasted. Anyway, not a bad submission, but again, it needs to be fleshed out more.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 018]

Lol.

This series just keeps on rolling along. Before I know you guys will be at 50 and I wouldent even know. Anyway as usual Hitler has done a great job in catching a pokemon, and he just looks ridicoulous. Which adds to the lulz. Although the graphcis was only one screen the overall presentation was amasing. Another great submission.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

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[Um...Yeah...]

Well. It has it's ups and downs.

To be quite honest it does have it's own set of ups and downs. For one, one of the better things about it is the graphics. They look smooth and well made, and is nice to look at in general, but there really isnt much action going on. I mean all there doing is running around and falling and dieing. Thats not interesting. Not only that, but its all in one generic room. If you added windows or an outside background or somthing this could be quite good. Okay submission, probebley more in the average range.

Oouch responds:

Thank you sooo much!!
I will take a screenie of my desktop and do the same thing. But the stick mans will run around falling on things like Firefox!
I know that it isn\t great, as I said, I only made it beacouse I was bored. After I thought it was pretty good, so I decided to see what everyone here on NG thought.

[Ruined]

Great.

Now this is what a good submission looks like. Not only is it a joy to watch, but it dosent hurt the hears ether. Although you dont have captions, which is a must have option, the graphics more then make up for it. They are smooth, realistic and just plain great. On top of all that its quite funny too. Good job on this submission, one of the better ones out there. Probebley a front runner for dailey too.

[digi charat ajdrez-rukis]

A little deviant art?

Is that what I saw in there? A little deviant art cameo? Nonethelss it would have been nice if you gave us the option to see it in english. I mean all you had to have done is translate with site and add captions, that would have been easy. Anyway, the graphics looked nice in this submission and from what I can see the story wasnt to bad. Good work.

ajedrez responds:

thank you very much I feel it speak English:) but not if these translators viruales are the sufficient thing.

[BioShocking]

Haha.

Although you still managed to make a submission with out captions, or the caption option, it was quite funny. The graphics, although in a short flash were very good and I liked it. Although no story ether, that was mainly because of the shortness of the submission. The humour in it shined with the best of them and thats what really made this submission good. Great job on the flash.

[Pokemon - flash shorts 1]

Lame attempt at being funny.

Thats what this is. Its a very lame attempt at trying to be funny. First of all grass dosent come to life. Second of all the predictible "story" really made this submission bad in my eyes. Not only that, but it was all recycled graphics from somewhere else, which I cant give you points for. So all in all you made a bad flash submission.

[Secrets of B]

2.31?

2.31? 2.3?! How did this get that score. All it is is a simple loop of Bs inside Bs. Seriousley, although this is probebley not true, im not bothering to check, you did make something orginal. And you did make me think about it. Nonetheless the graphics in this sucked, but that was obvious. Next time make an actual animation.

[D4ilytoon # 338]

The ss.

I just want to know one thing. Did the SS ever actually submit good submissions? You know as well as I do that this submission is very bad, maybe the first one had some potetnial, but the rest were just horrible especially the last one. The graphics in the first one I thought were good, even if I didint really get the whole point of it. The rest of the submissions were just spam submissions. Next time fill the collab with good submissions from ALL people.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

you are an idiot